tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-671005556497798148.post1331312877517313633..comments2023-08-06T05:11:59.488-07:00Comments on UKOK! MalisaNevesSequeira: A coin to mark Henry VIII anniversaryMalisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14914196352649252507noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-671005556497798148.post-57740021282150601342009-06-10T09:59:24.841-07:002009-06-10T09:59:24.841-07:00Hi Malisa,
The blog seems to be in order - some o...Hi Malisa,<br /><br />The blog seems to be in order - some of your posts are a bit short, I'd say (especially the 'reaction/your own opinion' part), but just about long enough.<br /><br />My commentary will therefore be about the writing itself - I'll comment on 2 posts specifically, including this one. My comments or corrections are in [brackets]. Special attention: verb tenses, punctuation!<br /><br />The Royal Mint is marking the 500 year [anniversary] of King Henry VIII['s reign] by making a limited edition 5 pounds coin. The “coins are fit for a King” because they are made [out of] four different materials[:] platinum, gold, silver and cupro- nickel, so everyone can buy one according to [what] their wallet [allows]. The coins will cost between 9 pounds 99 to a whopping 4,400 pounds[.] [T]he coin will also show the words Rosa Sine Spina, meaning “rose without a thorn”, which feature[d] on coins in []1509. This coin will honor the “love him or hate him["] monarch that is famous for [having] been married six times and [h]is very large appetite. <br />http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/uk_news/8089561.stm<br /><br />Reaction:<br /><br />It looks like a very nice coin. I watched the series [The Tudors*italics*] and [it gave me] the chance to learn about Henry VIII. He was very young when he became [] King of England and made a lot of mistakes. He changed the history of England forever and reinvented the church. [As] Thomas More said in [The Tudors*italics*][,] “when the lion knows his own strength no man can stop hem” and that is what happen[ed] after Henry VIII realized that he was the King and that people had to listen to him.Koenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00830549486814122844noreply@blogger.com